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The pie chart shows the recent production and future projections of four renewable energy sources in Brazil .

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The rendered pie chart indicates the information about the recent production and future projections of four renewable energy sources in Brazil. Overall, it is clearly seen that hydro electricity and firewood charcoal was maximum, while in future it is estimated it will minimum. It is crystal clear from the pie chart, in 2012 hydro and electricity production was 33% which is anticipated in 2021 it will decline by nearly 5% in renewable sources. Likewise, in Brazil production of firewood and charcoal was approximately 20% in 2012, and in 2021, it is assumed that it will be nearly 14%. Probing ahead, production of other renewable was about one in ten in 2012, while in future it will increase by 2%. Similarly, 38% of production was in sugarcane and derivations, but after nine years it is predicted 47. 18% incline in production.
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and future projections of four renewable energy sources in Brazil.

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hydro electricity
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from the pie chart, in 2012 hydro and electricity
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was 33% which
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in 2021 it will decline by
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5% in renewable sources.
Likewise
, in Brazil
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of firewood and charcoal was approximately 20% in 2012, and in 2021, it
is assumed
that it will be
nearly
14%.

Probing ahead,
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of other renewable was about one in ten in 2012, while in future it will increase by 2%.
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, 38% of
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was in sugarcane and derivations,
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after nine years it
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47. 18% incline in
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the recent production and future projections of four renewable energy sources in Brazil.

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