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Survey about adult education

Survey about adult education 7aVQA
The following chart provide information about the reason why adult decide to study and how the cost should be shared between taxpayer, individual and eployer. Figure one implay the majority of participant decide to study because they interested with the subject or because they want to gain spesific skill which is 40% and 38% of participant choose this option. Around tweenty percent of participant decide to study because the either they want to get additional sklill which help them to improve their work in current jog or to get promotion or jus enjoying to study. Only few paticipant decide to study to get promotion or meet the people. Only about twelve and ten percent of respondence choose that option, respectively. Moreover, Majority or about 40% of respondence agree that the cost of each course should be share by individual. The rest, agree that the cost of each course shold be share by employer and taxpayer which is 35% and 20% of respondence agree on ti, respectively
The following chart provide information about the reason why adult
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study
and how the cost should
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between taxpayer, individual and
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eployer
. Figure one
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implay
the majority of participant
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decide
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they interested with the subject or
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because
they want to gain
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spesific
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skill
which is 40% and 38% of participant choose this option. Around
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tweenty
percent of participant
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decide
to
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study
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because
the either they want to
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get
additional
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sklill
which
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help
them to
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improve
their work in
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current
jog or to
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get
promotion or
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jus
enjoying to
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study
.
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few
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paticipant
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decide
to
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study
to
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get
promotion or
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meet
the
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people
.
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Only
about twelve and ten percent of
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respondence
choose that option,
respectively
.
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, Majority or about 40% of
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respondence
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agree
that the cost of each course should be share by individual. The rest,
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agree
that the cost of each
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course shold
be share by employer and taxpayer which is 35% and 20% of
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respondence
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agree
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IELTS academic Survey about adult education

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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