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Write a paragraph of about 150-180 words on the benefits of using electronic devices in learning.

Write a paragraph of about 150-180 words on the benefits of using electronic devices in learning. 6LX0G
With today’s technology, which is developing fast in the Industry 4. 0, we are surrounded by so many smart tools to improve standards of life. Electronic devices are one category of those tools. One aspect that electronic devices do support is learning. There are four most popular benefits of using those devices for studying. First of all, students can easily look for information related to their lessons. Instead of wasting time finding in the thick books, google can provide information in a short period of time. Secondly, some appliances or websites may help students learn more effectively. For example, GoConqr is a free online learning platform where Mind Maps, Flashcards, Study Planner & other resources can be created, shared and discovered. Moreover, using electronic devices improves student’s ability and skills of using computer through pratice using them for a long time. And finnally, they can contact teacher and friends to ask for support in homework. In conclusion, advantages of using electronic devices are undeniable but students should be careful and use them properly.
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today
’s technology, which is developing
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fast
in the Industry 4. 0, we
are surrounded
by
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so
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many
smart tools to
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improve
standards of life.
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Electronic
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devices
are one category of those tools. One aspect that
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electronic
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devices
do support is learning. There are four most popular benefits of using those
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devices
for studying.
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First of all
,
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students
can
easily
look for information related to their lessons.
Instead
of wasting time finding in the thick books, google can provide information in a short period of time.
Secondly
,
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some
appliances or websites may
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help
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students
learn more
effectively
.
For example
,
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GoConqr
is a free online learning platform where Mind Maps, Flashcards, Study Planner & other resources can
be created
, shared and discovered.
Moreover
, using
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electronic
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devices
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improves
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student’s
ability and
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skills
of using computer through
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pratice
using them for a long time. And
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finnally
, they can contact teacher and friends to
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ask for
support in homework.
In conclusion
, advantages of using
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electronic
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devices
are undeniable
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but
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students
should be careful and
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use
them
properly
.
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IELTS academic Write a paragraph of about 150-180 words on the benefits of using electronic devices in learning.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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