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World’s most studied language

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The following diagram contains the information about the most studied languages around the world. Overall, the chart has information about the languages, number of people that are learning the certain dialect, and compares it to ones who is native. Apart from those rates, the table also gives data of the countries where language is spoken. According to the given statistics, over 1, 5 billion individuals studying English, and the number of people who speak it as a mother tongue is about 527 million. This language is the most popular comparing to others. The second widespread dialect is French. Table shows that folk who study this language are around 82 million indicator, which is just over a quarter of native speaks’ index. In addition, Chinese ranks third among the most widely spoken languages
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around the world.

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, number of
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is
native. Apart from those rates, the table
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gives data of the countries where
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language
is spoken
.

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statistics, over 1, 5 billion individuals studying English, and the number of
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people
who speak it as a mother tongue is about 527 million. This
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is the most popular comparing to others. The second widespread dialect is French. Table
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that folk who study this
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are around 82 million
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IELTS academic World’s most studied language

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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