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World wide water consumption by sector

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The given paragraph provides data about comprehensive water usage by sector over a period and the table shows the consumption of water in two various nations in a particular year. It can be seen that in the 19th century water usage for agricultural purposes remained high and it increased year by year. The industrial and domestic water usage was extremely minimal till half of the 19th century and there was a gradual increase happened over the years till 2000. It is clear from the table that Brazil's water consumption was immensely huge compared to Congo's usage of water. International water consumption for agricultural purpose was increased from 500km3 to 3000 km3 in between 1990 and 2000. And the domestic use of water was gradually increased from minimal to about 300km3 and about 1000km3 respectively by the year of 2000 from the beginning of the 19 the century. Moreover, water consumption for agricultural use remained high all time throughout the period. Brazil's water usage was very high which is 359km3 compared to Congo's water consumption which was only 8m3 in the year 2000.
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by sector over a period and the table
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in two various nations in a particular
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. It can be
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that in the 19th century
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for agricultural purposes remained high and it increased
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by
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. The industrial and domestic
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was
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from the table that Brazil's
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was
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huge compared to Congo's
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of
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. International
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consumption
for agricultural purpose
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increased from minimal to about 300km3 and about 1000km3
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of 2000 from the beginning of the 19 the century.
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for agricultural
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remained high all time throughout the period. Brazil's
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high which is 359km3 compared to Congo's
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8m3 in the
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2000.
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IELTS academic World wide water consumption by sector

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  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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