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World spending and population

World spending and population okQD9

The first pie chart compares the shares of four major items in global expenditure. It is observed that the most significant amounts are paid for food (almost a quarter of global expenditure) and transport (almost 20%), while housing also accounts for a considerable proportion. The least among the four is spent on clothing (merely 6 percent) and the remaining 40% is spent on a variety of other items. The second diagram illustrates how global population is distributed. According to this chart, there is a significant difference between the population of Asia and that of other continents since 3 out of every 5 human beings live in Asia. Europe and the Americas share similar proportions and together are host to roughly one-third of the world’s population, while the inhabitants of Africa form a mere one-tenth. To sum up, four items are responsible for three-fifths of the overall spending around the world, the most prominent share being that of food. Moreover, the largest group of humans populates Asia, the population of which outnumbers that of the rest of the world by 3 to 2.

The first
 pie chart compares the shares of four major items in global expenditure. It is observed
 that the most

significant amounts are paid
 for food (almost a quarter of global expenditure) and transport (almost 20%), while

housing also
 accounts for a considerable proportion. The least among the four is spent
 on clothing (merely
 6

percent) and the remaining 40% is spent
 on a variety of other items.

The second diagram illustrates how global You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
is distributed
. According to this chart, there is a significant

difference between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 of Asia and that of other continents since 3 out of every 5 human beings This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live


in Asia. Europe and the Americas share similar proportions and together are host to roughly one-third of the

world’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
, while the inhabitants of Africa form a mere one-tenth.

To sum up, four items are responsible for three-fifths of the overall
 spending around the world, the most

prominent share being that of food. Moreover
, the largest group of humans populates Asia, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 of

which outnumbers that of the rest of the world by 3 to 2. 