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Why do you think people spend too much money buying the latest devices?

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Nowadays, devices have become popular with everyone. Owning a device is quite normal if not some people have to spend a large amount of money to get the latest device. There are many reasons to explain this problem. Firstly, some new features will come with the new device, it will certainly come with a higher price, so consumers want to own those features to satisfy their needs, they have to pay at a higher price. For example, a new phone allows to take clear pictures in the dark so a professional photographer is willing to pay a lot to get good pictures in in the condition that lack of natural light. On the other hand, some people buy the latest tools just because they are trending. Besides, they want to be noticed by their expensive items. That's because for them, owning a limited or luxury tool is an excellent way to show the levels or the reputations of the rich men. However, they don't really have a need to take advantage of the new benefits the device offers. For example, a phone allows to use 2 sims but someone really only needs 1 sim to communicate, they don't use the other but they still buy that phone just because it is the newest device.

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