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Knowledge and life skills are fundamental things required to have an up-and-coming career. But there is a lot of discussion about whether the authorities should shift towards a life-skills rather than keep the traditional one which pays much attention to knowledge. This essay attempts to advocate the former stance. In a modern world, young people tend to change jobs more recently than they do in the past. This means that no matter what you had learned in university or high school, it does not mean that you have to choose the correct subject that you study
Knowledge and life
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skills
are fundamental things required to have an up-and-coming career.
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But
there is
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a lot of
discussion about whether the authorities should shift towards a life-
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skills
rather
than
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keep
the traditional one which pays much attention to knowledge. This essay attempts to advocate the former stance. In a modern world, young
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people
tend to
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change
jobs more recently than they do in the past. This means that no matter what you had learned in university or high school, it does not mean that you
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have to
choose the correct subject that you
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study
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IELTS academic which one is more important, life skill or knowlede

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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