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Summarise the changes that happened

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The 2 maps illustrate all the changes that took place in a neighborhood after the construction of a mall. Overall, it is evident that before the mall was constructed, the area was a lot greener and more country-like. Also, the size of the mall required more than half of the neighborhood's area. Before the construction, opposite Main Street, a book store and a shoe store were situated. The woods were located just behind those stores. Next to the woods, there was a beautifully built park around a lake. On the other side of Main Street was the residential area. The block directly next to Main Street included 4 houses. Likewise, Oak street had a similar block next to it with 4 homes. However, after the construction, most of the neighborhood's area is taken up by the mall. The book and shoe stores and the woods are replaced by a newly built shopping mall while a parking lot currently occupies the area where the park and lake were situated. Additionally, two of the houses on Main Street were demolished in order to make way for the enlarged parking lot whilst the block next to Oak Street was left untouched.
The 2 maps illustrate all the
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changes
that took place in a neighborhood after the construction of a mall.

Overall
, it is evident that
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before
the
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mall
was constructed
, the
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area
was a lot greener and more country-like.
Also
, the size of the
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mall
required more than half of the neighborhood's area.

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Before
the construction, opposite
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Main
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Street
, a book
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store
and a shoe
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store
were situated
. The woods
were located
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just
behind those
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stores
.
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Next
to the woods, there was a
beautifully
built park around a lake. On the other side of
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Main
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Street
was the residential
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area
. The block
directly
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next
to
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Main
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Street
included 4
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houses
.
Likewise
, Oak
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street
had a similar block
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next
to it with 4 homes.

However
, after the construction, most of the neighborhood's
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area
is taken
up by the
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mall
. The book and shoe
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stores
and the woods
are replaced
by a
newly
built shopping
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mall
while a parking lot
currently
occupies the
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area
where the park and lake
were situated
.
Additionally
, two of the
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houses
on
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Main
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Street
were demolished
in order to
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make
way for the enlarged parking lot whilst the block
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next
to Oak
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Street
was
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left
untouched.
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