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The two maps illustrate the infrastructures changed around the main entrance to an urban hospital between 2007 and 2010. It can be seen from two pictures that there is considerable innovation in the infrastructure including two roundabouts, new bus station, seperated car park for patients and staff in the period of three years at the urban hospital. The year 2010 witnessed the emergence of a new bus station on the west of the road in place of six bus stops. Further developments were the first roundabout located in the south of the hospital and the second one placed at four-way junction on the city road, these roundabouts were linked with a new bus stop. In terms of car park places, the westside of the hospital experienced the erection of a new public car park connected with Ring road, but the old car park was still utilizing as the parking place for staff working in the hospital.

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 for patients and staff in the period of three years at the urban hospital.

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car
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