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what is advantage of internet

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Now a day’s internet is very important in our life. every purpose we use internet such as, business purpose, academic purpose and so on. I think internet is blessed for us because the internet has made our lives much easier and secure. By the internet, we can easily access several social media apps to connect with friends and relatives. We can easily build up our business using the internet, for our business we can create website which that very essential for business, we can easily share information about our business and also upload product details. Customer easily can reach information about product and they can check the business authenticity. Through the internet we can easily advertisement in our company for a low price which is a good aspect for business. in this moment internet are available/ reasonable price, we can get the news any time anywhere. People can share news with his friends and relative and they can easily know about the world. People life easier for the internet. People can easily arrange meeting by the internet which is very helpful for them. Teacher can easily teach student by online class and many universities allow to online class for the foreign students.
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important
in our life.
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every
purpose we
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internet such as,
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purpose, academic purpose and
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internet
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the internet has made our
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lives
much easier and secure. By the internet, we can
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easily
access several social media apps to connect with friends and relatives. We can
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easily
build up our
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business
using the internet, for our
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business
we can create website which that
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very
essential for
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business
, we can
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easily
share information about our
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business
and
also
upload product
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details
. Customer
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easily
can reach information about
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product and
they can
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check
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authenticity. Through the internet we can
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easily
advertisement in our
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company
for a low price which is a
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aspect for business.

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internet are available/ reasonable price, we can
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get
the news any time anywhere.
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People
can share news with his friends and
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relative and
they can
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easily
know about the world.
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People
life easier for the internet.
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People
can
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arrange meeting by the internet which is
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helpful for them. Teacher can
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teach student by online
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and
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universities
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to online
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for the foreign students.

IELTS academic what is advantage of internet

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3 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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