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The Environment is very important for both human and animals. I think we must maintain the consistence of the environment because Day by day increase our population, on the other hand, raise environment pollution which is bad for environment. Day by day reduce our land and cut million of trees for modern globization. For this reason, increase air pollution which is harmful for human health. Oxygen levels are decreasing day by day, because people are not concern about the environment. People do not use proper plan, they throw the garbage any where and also the factory waste extraction without any plan as a result, a lot of stench spreads from here and increase air pollution. For the modern glovalization we are making lots of haritize building, mail and factory for this reson, have to use havy equipment and making noise which is extremely harmful for the environment. When we are go to travel bus or car people are making horn without any reason which is very bad for children. Water pollution increase day by day because people are not following the right rules. Industrial waste dumped in to the river without any recycling process. Moreover, all over the world increased demand for use plastics which is very bad for environment.
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Day by day
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pollution which is
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million of trees for modern
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air pollution which is harmful for human health. Oxygen levels are decreasing day by day,
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people
are not concern about the
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do not
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the factory waste extraction without any plan
as a result
,
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stench spreads from here and
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For the modern
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equipment and making noise which is
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are making horn without any reason which is
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Water pollution
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day by day
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are not following the right
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plastics which is
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