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What is your favorite book or movie, and why should people read or watch it?

What is your favorite book or movie, and why should people read or watch it? 0lDGn
I am the type of person who does not particularly enjoy reading books, but when the opportunity arises, I will gladly purchase them in order to store them on a shelf. However, I am aware of my personal taste for watching movies, and I enjoy watching Harry Potter, which is memorable from my childhood. I believe that people in their twenties will be most affected by this film, which is more of a series than a film. and I would like to remind everyone. The story is actually mainly about the adventures of three children who live in a witchcraft world, and their stories are memorable for them to get it's like a roller coaster I would feel them. Throughout the series, there are moments of sadness and joy. Even though I am now in the working world, I still enjoy rewatching this. over and over again. Furthermore, I would recommend individuals to search besides their journeys, such as the British accent and the warmth of their adventure.
I am the type of person who does not
particularly
enjoy reading books,
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but
when the opportunity arises, I will
gladly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
them in order to store them on a shelf.
However
, I am aware of my personal taste for watching movies, and I enjoy watching Harry Potter, which is memorable from my childhood. I believe that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in their twenties will be most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
by this film, which is more of a series than a film.
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and
I would like to remind everyone. The story is actually
mainly
about the adventures of three children who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a witchcraft world, and their stories are memorable for them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it's like a roller coaster I would feel them. Throughout the series, there are moments of sadness and joy.
Even though
I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
in the working world, I
still
enjoy
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rewatching
this.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
over
and over again.
Furthermore
, I would recommend individuals to search
besides
their journeys, such as the British accent and the warmth of their adventure.

IELTS academic What is your favorite book or movie, and why should people read or watch it?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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