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Instant coffee and tea and cafe coffee

Instant coffee and tea and cafe coffee PVd6E

I have some opinion about this graph. First, in Australia, about 50 percent people go to the café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks each cities. There are the people who go café to drink coffee or tea with their friends or family. But, I don’t go to there. And I often drink instant coffee in house. The people go to café feel special rich. So they go to there. I think about the cost, I can’t go the café. Second, in Adelaide almost all project smaller than the other cities. The reason this figure I think in this region have a traditional drink and they like it better than coffee or tea. Or this region’s people don’t like these drink as compared with the others. T hird, in Hobard, they have most biggest consume of instant coffee. I think that they have same thinking aa me. But they consume a lot of coffee in café. Drinking coffee and tea is good for body. For example, concentration. But over drink is but for body. We have suitable amount.

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