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Water use from 1900 to 2000 in different sectors

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The pie chart and line chart provides information about water usage in year 2000 and the line chart shows information about worldwide water usage per sector from 1900 to 2000. Overall, most of the water was used for the agriculture sector and it was growing significantly until reached its highest point in year 2000. The use of water for drinking was the smallest out of the three categories. Looking at the pie chart, it shows that 70% of global water consumption was due to activities in agriculture sector. Additionally, the industrial sector also consumed a lot of water where it occupied 22% of the total consumption. The other sectors only had less than 7% use of water. In 1900, agricultural sector only used roughly 520 km3 of water, even though this number was relatively small, it was the largest user of water when compared to domestic and industrial use. The usage of water for agriculture grew almost 9 times bigger in 2000 compared to the beginning of the period. In contrast, the growth of water usage for household and industry use was relatively modest where it consumed 500 km3 and approximately 1250 km3 respectively in the same year.
The pie
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and line
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provides information about
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water
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usage
in year 2000 and the line
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chart
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information about worldwide
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water
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per
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sector
from 1900 to 2000.

Overall
, most of the
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water
was
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used
for the agriculture
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sector
and it was growing
significantly
until reached its highest point in year 2000. The
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of
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water
for drinking was the smallest out of the three categories.

Looking at the pie
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, it
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that 70% of global
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consumption was due to activities in agriculture
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sector
.
Additionally
, the industrial
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also
consumed
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a lot of
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where it occupied 22% of the total consumption. The other
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sectors
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only
had less than 7%
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use
of water.

In 1900, agricultural
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only
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used
roughly 520 km3 of
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,
even though
this number was
relatively
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small
, it was the largest user of
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when compared to domestic and industrial
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use
. The
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of
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for agriculture grew almost 9 times bigger in 2000 compared to the beginning of the period.
In contrast
, the growth of
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usage
for household and industry
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was
relatively
modest where it consumed 500 km3 and approximately 1250 km3
respectively
in the same year.
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IELTS academic Water use from 1900 to 2000 in different sectors

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