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The given pie charts show the percentage recycling, Incineration, underground burry, chemical treatment, and sea dumping done in 3 different countries including Republic of Korea, Sweden, and UK. In over all view, underground burying is done in all 3 countries, and hugely practiced in the UK, however sea dumping, and chemical treatment is only seen on the UK, on the other hand recycling is highly performed in Korea, to a lesser extent in Sweden, and not done in UK. Recycling is the most used way of treating wastes in Korea with 69 percent, which is higher than burying, and incineration with 22, and 9 percent respectively. However Sweden buries 55 percent of it wastes, incinerate 20 percent, and recycle 25 percent of them. On the inverse trend, 8 percent of the wastes are treated by chemicals, and dumped in the sea each in the UK, which is greater than that incinerated with 2 percent, where as the most used method is burying where 82 percent of wastes is buried in the UK.
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countries including Republic of Korea, Sweden, and UK. In over all view, underground burying
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way of treating
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in Korea with 69
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Sweden buries 55
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, incinerate 20
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, and recycle 25
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On the inverse trend, 8
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