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The graph shows the happiness quortien of people in three metros of the country

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The given bar graph depicts the information about happiness quatient of individuals in three different railways of nation. the vertical side shows number of people and horizontal side, three different computation After analysing, it is clearly seen that family had most happiness in three quatient in a Metro near about 82. While, New city railways people has 44 number in and career. Lakeview had 61 in Career and 42 in security. however, aurovile had opposite 16 security and 82 in career At last, Lakeview Metro people are more happy than others
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bar graph depicts the information about happiness
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quatient
of individuals in three
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different
railways of nation.
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the
vertical side
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shows
number of
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people
and horizontal side, three
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different
computation

After
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analysing
, it is
clearly
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seen
that family had most happiness in three
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quatient
in a Metro near about 82. While, New city railways
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people
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has
44 number in and career.
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Lakeview
had 61 in Career and 42 in security.
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however
,
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aurovile
had opposite 16 security and 82 in career

At last,
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Lakeview
Metro
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people
are more happy than others
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IELTS academic The graph shows the happiness quortien of people in three metros of the country

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