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developments in Raymond Village

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The diagrams illustrate the developments that have taken place in Raymond Village over the last 26 years. As an overall perspective, residential areas are expanded in the north-west and south of the village. In addition, in the north-east a majority of lands have altered into recreational areas. Some facilities like fishing port and fishmarket have been demolished. In 1995, the Village included 4 main areas. Firstly, housing area was located in the north-west along the road, and a small area of houses was in the middle-west which surrounded by a path. Secondly, in the north-east there was a farmland in the top of a forest park in the east. Thirdly, above the sea, which was in the south, there was a commercial area with a hotel and a café just off a road. Finally, in the south-west there was another commercial area involved shops and a fishmarket, and in the southern area there was a fishing port for local people. The village of Raymond has changed considerably since then. Initially, the accommodation in the north-west and west has had an expansion into the center and the west. Further, a golf course and two tennis courts have replaced the farmland and the forest park. Next, despite the altered parts, the hotel and the café have been retain in the same place. But there has placed a car park adjacent to the hotel. Furthermore, apartments and a restaurant have replaced fish market and shop, respectively. Also, fishing port has been demolish.

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Some
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fishmarket
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.

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Village
 included 4 main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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. Firstly
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small
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area
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houses
 was in the middle-west which surrounded by a path. Secondly
, in the north-east there was a farmland in the top of a forest park in the east. Thirdly
, above the sea, which was in the south, there was a commercial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
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just
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, in the south-west there was another commercial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
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fishmarket
, and in the southern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
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people
.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 of Raymond has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
considerably
 since then. Initially
, the accommodation in the north-west and west has had an expansion into the center and the west. Further
, a golf course and two tennis courts have replaced the farmland and the forest park. Next
, despite the altered parts, the hotel and the café have been Consider using a past participle here: "retained".retained
retain
 in the same place. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 there has placed a car park adjacent to the hotel. Furthermore
, apartments and a restaurant have replaced fish market and shop, respectively
. Also
, fishing port has been Consider using a past participle here: "demolished".demolished
demolish
. 