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Visits to and from the UK and most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999

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The given line graph illustrates the number of residents going to and from the UK from the year 1979 to 1999 whereas the bar graph tells about the most popular countries visited by residents of the UK in 1999. In the line graph the number of UK residents making visits abroad and the number of overseas residents visiting the UK are represented by a black thin line and a grey broad line respectively. The number of people are counted in millions. In the year 1999, France was the most popular country visited and Turkey was the least popular country visited by the UK citizens. Furthermore, Spain had around 9 million visitors, France had more than 10 million visitors and Turkey, Greece and USA had less than 5 million visitors. According to the line graph given we can infer that citizens of the UK travelling abroad were more than the overseas residents travelling to the UK. Initially there were only about 10 million UK residents travelling abroad but by 1999 there were more than 50 million people travelling abroad. Similarly, the number of people visiting the UK in 1979 were only 10 million. However, by 1999 the number of foreigners significantly rose to approximately 30 million.
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illustrates the
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of
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residents
going to and from the UK from the year 1979 to 1999 whereas the bar
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tells
about the most popular countries visited by
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of the UK in 1999. In the
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the
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of UK
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making visits
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abroad
and the
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of overseas
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residents
visiting the UK
are represented
by a black thin
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and a
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grey
broad
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respectively
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of
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counted in millions.

In the year 1999, France was the most popular country visited and Turkey was the least popular country visited by the UK citizens.
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, Spain had around 9
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visitors, France had more than 10
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visitors and Turkey, Greece and USA had less than 5
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visitors.

According to the
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we can infer that citizens of the UK
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were more than the overseas
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residents
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travelling
to the UK.
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there were
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about 10
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million
UK
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by 1999 there were more than 50
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people
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of
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visiting the UK in 1979 were
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10
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However
, by 1999 the
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of foreigners
significantly
rose to approximately 30
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IELTS academic Visits to and from the UK and most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999

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