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The chart compares information about the conclusion of enquire that was asked tourists to the Park Hotel how the rated the customer service of a hotel percentage-wise in 2005 and 2010.

The chart compares information about the conclusion of enquire that was asked tourists to the Park Hotel how the rated the customer service of a hotel percentage-wise in 2005 and 2010. 0EW51
The chart compares information about the conclusion of enquire that was asked tourists to the Park Hotel how the rated the customer service of a hotel percentage-wise in 2005 and 2010. Overall, at the beginning of the period the figure for satisfactory was the most dominant category while the opposite was ture for excellent and it was the least significant part of rate. Another interesting point is that despite being the least popular in 2005, the figure for excellent soared sharply and became second most dominant category at the end of the period. Although the ratio for very poor was the second least popular segment with 15% in 2005, it saw almost a threefold drammatic decrease to 4% in the next half decade. The latter most significant changes goes for satisfactory which it made up 46% in 2005, however it went down dramatically by 28% in the following 5 years. In comparton, the figure for poor witnesed much least changes among them. The rate for mentioned segment decreased from 21% to 11% thoughout period. Looking at the increased trends as regard, the most striking chages goes for excellent, which the figure for that was five time as high as that of in 2015. In other word, it account for 5% in 2005, and increased sharply in 2010. reaching to 28%. In 2010 the most popular category was the figure for good with 39% which it rised dramatically from 14%.
The chart compares information about the conclusion of
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enquire
that
was asked
tourists to the Park Hotel how the rated the customer service of a hotel percentage-wise in 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, at the beginning of the period the
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figure
for satisfactory was the most dominant category while the opposite was
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ture
for excellent and it was the least significant part of rate. Another interesting point is that despite being the least popular in 2005, the
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figure
for excellent soared
sharply
and became second most dominant category at the
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end
of the period.

Although the ratio for
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very
poor was the second least popular segment with 15% in 2005, it
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saw
almost a threefold
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drammatic
decrease to 4% in the
next
half decade. The latter most significant
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changes
goes for satisfactory which it made up 46% in 2005,
however
it went down
dramatically
by 28% in the following 5 years. In
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comparton
, the
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figure
for poor
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witnesed
much least
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changes
among them. The rate for mentioned segment decreased from 21% to 11%
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thoughout
period.

Looking at the increased trends as regard, the most striking
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chages
goes for excellent, which the
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figure
for that was five time as high as that of in 2015. In other word, it
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account
for 5% in 2005, and increased
sharply
in 2010.
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reaching
to 28%. In 2010 the most popular category was the
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figure
for
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good
with 39% which it
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rised
dramatically
from 14%.
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IELTS academic The chart compares information about the conclusion of enquire that was asked tourists to the Park Hotel how the rated the customer service of a hotel percentage-wise in 2005 and 2010.

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