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Coffee and tea purchased and consumed in the last four weeks in five Australian cities

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The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of the coffee and tea purchased and consumed in the last four weeks in five Australian cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart). It can clearly be seen that going to a cafe to have coffee or tea in these places in Australia was the most common routine, except Adelaide. Moreover, the proportion of people spending on instant coffee was always significantly higher than on fresh coffee. Nearly 55, 64, 63, and 62 percent of inhabitants in Hobart, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Sydney went to a coffee shop for coffee or tea, sequentially, but slightly under half of the citizens in Adelaide did the same way. In other five cities, over half of the people bought instant coffee beverages specific to tea and coffee, with an estimated 55 percent in Hobart and Brisbane. In Melbourne city, the number of the population visited a coffee house for tea and coffee was above 60%. Melbourne citizens bought instant coffee at a rate of about 48%, which was roughly 3% higher than Sydney residents.
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and consumed in the last four weeks in five Australian cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart).

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that going to a
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in these places in Australia was the most common routine, except Adelaide.
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, the proportion of
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spending on instant
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was always
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higher than on fresh coffee.

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55, 64, 63, and 62 percent of inhabitants in Hobart, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Sydney went to a
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shop for
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under half of the citizens in Adelaide did the same way. In other five cities, over half of the
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instant
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beverages specific to
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, with an estimated 55 percent in Hobart and Brisbane.

In Melbourne city, the number of the population visited a
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was above 60%. Melbourne citizens
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at a rate of about 48%, which was roughly 3% higher than Sydney residents.
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IELTS academic Coffee and tea purchased and consumed in the last four weeks in five Australian cities

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