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THE FOLLOWING bar chart comarative selling rates of four types of books in Ekushey book fair in 2013

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The rendered bar graph depicts the information regarding the number of sailes of four books in Ekushey book fair in the year of2013. Overall, it can be overviewed that, maximum Nobels and science fiction had been purchased from Ekushey book fair by individuals while poetry showed least trend in given time period. At the fleeting glance, 4000science fiction was sold in Ekushey book fair moreover it can be seen that the count of the nobel books was highest in 2013. Now it is turning to a more detailed anslysis in the bar graph, approximately 2000 history books purchased in Ekushey fair since 2012 whereas poetry book was least sold in this year
The rendered bar graph depicts the information regarding the number of
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Ekushey
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book
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fair
in the year of2013.

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be overviewed
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Nobels
and science fiction had been
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purchased
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Ekushey
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book
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fair
by individuals while poetry
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showed
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least
trend in
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given
time period.

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was sold
in
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Ekushey
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book
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fair
moreover
it can be
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seen
that the count of the
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nobel
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books
was highest in 2013.

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Now
it is turning to a more detailed
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anslysis
in the bar graph, approximately 2000 history
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books
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purchased
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Ekushey
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fair
since 2012 whereas poetry
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book
was least sold in this year
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IELTS academic THE FOLLOWING bar chart comarative selling rates of four types of books in Ekushey book fair in 2013

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