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University study for Adult Education Survey

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The given chart is about th adult education survey. In addition to that, there is. A brief prescription why adults choose to study. The survey of adult study in University lecture is described in the form of graph chart and pie chart, where graph chart is stand for the reasons why adults decide to study, whereas pie chart shows the costs of adults Education. Here, given information is in the form of percentage which is shown on X -Axis and the Y -Axis suggests reasons regarding choosing study. Overall, the bar chart shows the major increase in the subject of interest which is 40% for appropriate qualifications. Study shows 38% in bar chart. Moreover reasons for study mainly to improve perspects of promotion and enjoy learning remains at same level which is 20 %. Adult education is helpful for current job which lies 22 % of total reasons. In addition to that 12 % helps to change the jobs in progression. Although for making new friends and to come to meet new people study helps 9%.
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adult education survey.
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adults
choose to study.

The survey of adult
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study
in University lecture is
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in the form of graph
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and pie
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, where graph
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is stand for the
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reasons
why
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adults
decide to
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study
, whereas pie
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chart
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shows
the costs of
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adults
Education.

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information is in the form of percentage which
is shown
on X -Axis and the Y -Axis suggests
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reasons
regarding choosing study.

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, the bar
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chart
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shows
the major increase in the subject of interest which is 40% for appropriate qualifications.
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Study
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shows
38% in bar
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perspects
of promotion and enjoy learning remains at same level which is 20 %.

Adult education is helpful for
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job which lies 22 % of total
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.
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to that 12 %
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helps
to
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9%.
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IELTS academic University study for Adult Education Survey

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
176 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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