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University sport center diagrams

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The plans illustrate fundamental changes is going to happen in a university sports center after renovation. Overall, it is noticeable that the sports area is going to be expanded with at least five new features and there will be notable changes to outdoor courts and amenities of this spot. Looking at the map in more detail, we can see that the west outdoor courts is going to converted into leisure pool and a changing room. Another significant change will be expansion of the gym which is located at the north of our diagram. As well as constructions mentioned above, there is going to replaced east outdoor court with an sports hall beside the setting area and two dance studios and also another changing room in the southeast. Thinking commercially, reception area will be enlarged and it’s going to be contained a sports shop and a cafeteria. To sum up, the sports place will be developed extensively, inclusive of recreational facilities.
The plans illustrate fundamental
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changes
is going to happen in a university
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sports
center after renovation.

Overall
, it is noticeable that the
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sports
area is going to
be expanded
with at least five new features and there will be notable
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changes
to outdoor courts and amenities of this spot.

Looking at the map in more detail, we can
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see
that the west outdoor courts is going to
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converted
into leisure pool and a changing room.

Another significant
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change
will be expansion of the gym which
is located
at the north of our diagram.

As well
as constructions mentioned above, there is going to
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replaced
east outdoor court with
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an
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sports
hall beside the setting area and two dance studios and
also
another changing room in the southeast.

Thinking
commercially
, reception area will
be enlarged
and it’s going to
be contained
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
shop and a cafeteria.

To sum up, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
place will
be developed
extensively
, inclusive of recreational facilities.
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