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The given diagram depicts the process of selling software for smartphones and other devices. Overall, the process of developing a language application is started from a person's Idea after that it had begun to continue the other procedures following by some steps, and eventually at the end, it went up to people to use. Firstly, someone thought about its application then some expert started to research the software after that it went for approval and it had submitted to an app developer in this way they started to design the application even though some designer I started to edit, review than the people of the department started to testing the application then it had sent to finalization d and ionization of design, eventually it had ready for launching uploading and downloading
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diagram depicts the process of selling software for smartphones and other devices.

Overall
, the process of developing a language
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application
is
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started
from a person's
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Idea
after that it had begun to continue the other procedures following by
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some
steps, and
eventually
at the
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end
, it went up to
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people
to
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use
.

Firstly
, someone
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thought
about its
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application
then
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some
expert
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started
to research the software after that it went for approval and it had submitted to an app developer in this way they
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started
to design the
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application
even though
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some
designer I
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started
to edit,
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review
than the
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people
of the department
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started
to testing the
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application
then it had
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sent
to finalization d and ionization of design,
eventually
it had ready for launching uploading and downloading

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Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
130 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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