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Maps depict some changes in fernton since 1990 to 2012

Maps depict some changes in fernton since 1990 to 2012 3bmkm
These two maps illustrate how Fenton has changed since 1990 to 2012. As it is obvious some changes have taken place in Fenton city during 1990 and 2012. Looking in more details, as it is clear to the north of fernton there was playing filled with trees which was on the way of the high street, then it replaced with the blocks of flats. Also to the west of the city there were houses near to cafe and park, then it transformed to blocks of flats serve the hotel and golf course. Moreover the hospital has expended after it was small. while in the middle south of the subrub there was a small theatre then, the cinema was replaced instead as well as the supermarket was constructed as alternative of shops was in Frenton in 1990. In addition to the east there was a bank but, it transformed to restaurant. Furthermore, more trees were founded in south east and then it replaced with technopark that provide alot of activities for visitors.
These two maps illustrate how
Fenton
has
changed
since 1990 to 2012. As it is obvious
some
changes
have taken place in
Fenton
city during 1990 and 2012. Looking in more
details
, as it is
clear
to the north of
fernton
there was playing filled with trees which was on the way of the high street, then it replaced with the blocks of flats.
Also
to the west of the city there were
houses
near to
cafe
and park, then it transformed to blocks of flats serve the hotel and golf course.
Moreover
the hospital has expended after it was
small
.
while
in the middle south of the
subrub
there was a
small
theatre
then, the cinema
was replaced
instead
as well
as the supermarket
was constructed
as alternative of shops was in
Frenton
in 1990.
In addition
to the east there was a bank
but
, it transformed to restaurant.
Furthermore
, more trees
were founded
in
south east
and then it replaced with
technopark
that provide
alot
of activities for visitors.
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