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The bar graph shows the percentage of waste disposal in Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur, and Amman by using four different treatment processes such as landfill, incineration, recycling, and composting. The total waste in the four cities that disposed of is in the range of 0 to 80%. Overall, the percentage of waste disposal varies from one city to another. The landfill is the most popular treatment method in Toronto and Amman, while in Madrid and Kuala Lumpur, incineration is more common to use compared to other disposal methods. The highest percentage of total waste that recycled happens in Madrid at about 22%, slightly higher than Kuala Lumpur with the percentage around 21%. The recycling method is the third most popular among other disposal methods, after landfill and incineration. The lowest percentage of waste disposal among the four cities is using a composting method, with no more than 10% waste processed by composting method.
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in Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur, and Amman by using four
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treatment processes such as landfill, incineration, recycling, and composting. The total
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in the four cities that disposed of is in the range of 0 to 80%.

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in Toronto and Amman, while in Madrid and Kuala Lumpur, incineration is more common to
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that recycled happens in Madrid at about 22%,
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IELTS academic Rainwater Collection for Drinking Water

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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