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Two different types of graph to show UK residence trip to other countries and overseas people visit to UK

Two different types of graph to show UK residence trip to other countries and overseas people visit to UK 7eG6

The line chart represents travel to and from the UK over a period of twenty years between 1979 and 1999 while the bar graph illustrates the major famous nation visiting by UK citizen. Overall, the number of UK people who went to another country was expanded six times higher at the end of the period whereas France is the most popular holiday destination among the other five countries. During the year 1979, about 10 million UK residents travel to those countries; in the same way, an equal proportion of visitors came to the UK that year. After five years, the rate of travellers outside of the UK slightly grew to 20m, where the amount of tourist visited the UK increase a little more than 14m. In 1994, approximately 45m UK people went for an international vacation; on the other hand, around 25m visitor choose the UK as their holiday destination. At the end of the period, the UK population is abroad visiting rate peaked at nearly above 55m; in contrast, the UK visitor rate gradually rose to under 30 million. In terms of countries visited by the UK population, France is the preferable country, while almost 12m those people visited there. The British's second popular holiday destination was Spain; thus, roughly 8 million went to this place. However, the USA and Greece were the least desirable choice for a trip.

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