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The table shows data about the average lenght of time in minutes that people of different ages spend in a consultation with family doctors in a various countries. Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about the average lenght of time in minutes that people of different ages spend in a consultation with family doctors in a various countries. Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant. pwE0

Illustration showing figures of typical time patients spend with medical practitioners in various countries, age range of 10 -70 is given for the study. Overall, nine countries used for the research. According to the data, generally, 5 countries constantly increases time of stay as the age increases as well, other countries fluctuates but only 1country steadily maintained high number slightly rises at the oldest age. To begin, France 16- 38, Brazil 12-20, USA 13- 36, UK 9 -21 and Italy 17- 29. From the numbers allocated, they steadily maintained increament the age goes high. India, had a more mark of rise and fall, peaking at 21 minutes for people aged 40 - 60 years, declines to 11 for those 70 plus. Kenya declines steadily as age increases from 15 miuntes for the youngest to 10 minutes for the aged adults. It is only Chile, that plunged at 32 minutes from younger aged then, slightly rise to 38 minutes for the oldest people.

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