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The charts below show the percentage of three types of nutrients in meals,which all may be unhealthy if eaten too much

The charts below show the percentage of three types of nutrients in meals, which all may be unhealthy if eaten too much 2WAw
The pie charts illustrate the average proportions of sodium, Saturated fat, Added sugar in meals in the USA. Excessive eaten of those elements might be harmful. Overall, dinner has the highest percentage of sodium together with saturated fats respectively. While in snacks added sugar grab the bigest portion and breakfast has the smallest portion Starting from first chart sodium has used 43% for making dinner. In snacks and breakfast sodium is used in a similar minority portion of 14%. To prepare lunch sodium has used 29% In the second chart to make dinner saturated fat has used in a highest portion of 37%. On the other hand, in third chart to make dinner added sugar has used 23%. Making to breakfast and lunch saturated fat used 21% and 26% respectively. In contrast to make breakfast and lunch added sugar is used just 16% and 19%
The pie
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illustrate the average proportions of sodium,
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Saturated
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fat
,
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Added
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sugar
in meals in the USA. Excessive eaten of those elements might be harmful.

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,
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dinner
has the highest percentage of sodium together with
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saturated
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fats
respectively
. While in snacks
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added
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grab the
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portion and
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has the smallest portion

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sodium has
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43% for making
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. In snacks and
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sodium is
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in a similar minority portion of 14%. To prepare lunch sodium has
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29%

In the second
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dinner
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23%. Making to
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breakfast
and lunch
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saturated
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fat
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21% and 26%
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.
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16% and 19%

IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of three types of nutrients in meals, which all may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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