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The bar chart shows the elderly citizens in three countries in 1980, 2000, and 2030.

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The bar chart illustrates how many old people who live in three different nations (Canada, Germany and the UK) are available in the years 1980, 2000 and there are some exact predictions for the future. Overall, among the given countries, Germany dominated with a slight higher number of elderly citizens than the other partners and this is being expected in the future. In 1980, 10% of population was accounted elderly people in Canada, lesser than the other countries had. Germany had 15% the elderly of its residents, slight higher than the United Kingdom in that year. The following given period saw citizens rise by a little amount in each country. For example, the percentage of oldsters in 1980 were renewed and reached by 15% in Germany. Changes in the other two countries' inhabitants became almost similar. It is expected that senior citizens will increase dramatically until 2030 and the highest rate of them will witness to reach 25 percent pensioners of population.
The bar chart illustrates how
many
old
people
who
live
in three
different
nations (Canada, Germany and the UK) are available in the years 1980, 2000 and there are
some
exact predictions for the future.

Overall
, among the
given
countries, Germany dominated with a slight higher number of elderly citizens than the other partners and this is being
expected
in the future.

In 1980, 10% of population
was accounted
elderly
people
in Canada, lesser than the other countries had. Germany had 15% the elderly of its residents, slight higher than the United Kingdom in that year. The following
given
period
saw
citizens rise by a
little
amount in each country.
For example
, the percentage of oldsters in 1980
were renewed
and reached by 15% in Germany.
Changes
in the other two countries' inhabitants became almost similar.

It is
expected
that senior citizens will increase
dramatically
until 2030 and the highest rate of them will witness to reach 25 percent pensioners of population.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the elderly citizens in three countries in 1980, 2000, and 2030.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
7.0
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