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Travel to and from the UK from 1979 through 1999

Travel to and from the UK from 1979 through 1999 GrJLw

Given a chart about travel to and from the UK from 1979 through 1999. Graphic represents that visits abroad by UK residents as well as visits to the UK by overseas residents are growing during the years. In 1979, there were 10 million visits to the UK, while around 3 million more people who are UK citizens traveled abroad. In the period 1979 to second half of 1980s the both graphics are slightly growing and reaching to 20 million travelers to the UK, and about 14-15 million visitors. The interesting fact is, the UK visitors count growth was dramatically changed in 1985s. For example, in period 1979-1984 visits abroad has grown from 13 milions to 18 millions, which is 5 million, meanwhlie, for the time range 1994 to 1999 the amount of tourists has grown from 42 millions to 53 millions. It is phenomenal, only in 15 years, about 2. 2 times more people traveled. The second chart is showing the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. In the 5th place is Turkey, about 3. 5 million UK residents visited to Turkey in 1 year. Next one is Greece with arround 4 milllion label. USA is very close to Greece, about 4. 2 million visitors from the UK. The silver goes to the Spain, as per chart there is huge difference between amount of UK visitors to USA and Spain. And lastly the gold medal goes to France, over 10 million tourists from the UK visited there in 1999.

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Given
 a chart about travel to and from the UK from 1979 through 1999.

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visits
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as well
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visits
 to the UK by overseas You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
 are growing during the years. In 1979, there were 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
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visits
 to the UK, while around 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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people
 who are UK citizens traveled abroad. In the period 1979 to second half of 1980s the both graphics are slightly
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. The interesting fact is, the UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
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 count growth was dramatically
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changed
 in 1985s. For example
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visits
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, for the time range 1994 to 1999 the amount of tourists has grown from 42 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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only
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people
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The second chart is showing the most popular countries visited by UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
 in 1999. In the 5th place is Turkey, about 3. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdwellerinmatecitizeninhabitantlocaltenant
residents
 visited to Turkey in 1 year. Next
 one is Greece with Possible spelling mistake found.aroundaground
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 label. USA is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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 close to Greece, about 4. 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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visitors
 from the UK. The silver goes to the Spain, as per chart there is huge difference between amount of UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
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 and Spain. And lastly
 the gold medal goes to France, over 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 tourists from the UK visited there in 1999. 