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Travel per person by car in Europe

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The bar chart illustrates the number of kilometres travelled by car per year in different countries in Europe. It can be seen that the number of kilometres travelled in France is slightly less than in Denmark. The number of kilometres registered in Denmark was around 13000 and it was the country with the most kilometres travelled, while Spain only marked around 9000 kilometres, and was the country with the least number of kilometers. Spain and Germany are the only countries in Europe that travel less than the average of 10000 kilometers per person by car. However, they’re still very close to this average. Overall, we can see that there is a clear difference between all of the countriesin Europe and the use of cars, for the differences between countries were thousands of kilometers.
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registered in Denmark was around 13000 and it was the
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