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travel per person by car

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The bar chart shows, the traveled kilometers by people in a car per year. The bar chart compares the kilometers per year in different countries. The measurements go from 0 to 14000, the three countries that travel more kilometers per year are European countries, Denmark, France and Italy after the first ones in the graph. Then they have some other countries that traveled some kilometers but not in a big amount as these. The average is EU that the amount is 10000 kilometers per year. Some other countries are below the average, but they are not so far, njor the smallest or the biggest.

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, the traveled kilometers by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in a car per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. The bar chart compares the kilometers per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 measurements go from 0 to 14000, the three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 that travel more kilometers per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 are European You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, Denmark, France and Italy after the first
 ones in the graph. Then they have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 that traveled This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 kilometers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 amount as these. The average is EU that the amount is 10000 kilometers per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 are below the average, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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 the smallest or the biggest. 