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Travel per person and times

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The bar chart intention is to describe and compare the displacement methods per person between different countries and EU average, and the commuting time of the different countries. Mainly the charts described that the travel per person by car where the bigger in Denmark. Which were around 12'300 kilometers per year, around two thousand more than the EU average. But in the other hand Spain and Germany had more than a thousand kilometers less.
The bar chart intention is to
describe
and compare the displacement methods per person between
different
countries and EU average, and the commuting time of the
different
countries.

Mainly
the charts
described
that the travel per person by car where the bigger in Denmark. Which were around
12'300
kilometers per year, around two thousand more than the EU average.
But
in the other hand Spain and Germany had more than a thousand kilometers less.
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