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The pie chart depicts the knowledge about the means of transportation in Edmonton.

The pie chart depicts the knowledge about the means of transportation in Edmonton. YLKkj
The pie chart depicts the knowledge about the means of transportation in Edmonton. Addition to this, there is a table which tell us regarding the reasons why people uses car in the city of Edmonton. It can be seen that majority of transportation is done by car, accounting for 45% among all. With 35% Light Rail Transit (LRT) is the second most transmission used in Edmonton. The usage of bus and taxi were similar throughout the city, that is, 10%. The data explain in the table concern with the utilization of car by people. The most consumption of car is for commuting to work, which cover over more than half a century, that is, 55%. However, it is quite surprising to note that people uses car for shopping as well as leisure activities is the least between all the usages contributing only 15% each. Business is the second most reason to use car as a transmission, which is 3 times the usage of shopping and leisure activities. All in all, it can be seen that car is the most prominent way of transportation in Edmonton city where as the bus and taxi contributes the least. Moreover, the most cars used by people are for commuting to work, business purpose as well as taking children to school.
The pie chart depicts the knowledge about the means of transportation in Edmonton. Addition to this, there is a table which
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that majority of transportation
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, accounting for 45% among all. With 35% Light Rail Transit (
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in Edmonton. The usage of bus and taxi were similar throughout the city,
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, 10%.

The data
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in the table concern with the utilization of
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most consumption of
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is for commuting to work, which cover over more than half a century,
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, 55%.
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, it is quite surprising to note that
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people
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for shopping
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as leisure activities is the least between all the usages contributing
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15% each. Business is the second most reason to
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as a transmission, which is 3 times the usage of shopping and leisure activities.

All in all, it can be
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is the most prominent way of transportation in Edmonton city
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are for commuting to work, business purpose
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