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The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources of greenhouse gas in the UK.

The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources of greenhouse gas in the UK. 2bAjx
The given column graph provides the information about carbon emissions from three fossil fuels namely Gas, Oil and Coal in the UK from 1990 to 2010. Units are measured in a million tons. Overall, the emissions from gas showed upward trend and from coal showed downward trend while, the emissions from oil fluctuated over the period. In 1990, the greenhouse gas emissions from gas stood at 210 million tons. However, these emissions increased gradually and reached at nearly 320 million tons by 2010. In contrast, the emissions from coal fell markedly from 310 million tons to 190 million tons over the given period of twenty years. On the other hand, the carbon emissions from oil showed number of fluctuations till 2000. However, there was a slight decline in the figure of carbon emission and peaked at 210 million tons from 270 million tons in 2010.
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emissions
from three fossil fuels
namely
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Gas
, Oil and Coal in the UK from 1990 to 2010. Units
are measured
in a
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million
tons.

Overall
, the
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emissions
from
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gas
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showed
upward trend and from coal
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showed
downward trend while, the
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emissions
from oil fluctuated over the period.

In 1990, the greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
from
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gas
stood at 210
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million
tons.
However
, these
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emissions
increased
gradually
and reached at
nearly
320
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million
tons by 2010.
In contrast
, the
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emissions
from coal fell
markedly
from 310
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million
tons to 190
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million
tons over the
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given
period of twenty years.

On the other hand
, the carbon
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emissions
from oil
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showed
number of fluctuations till 2000.
However
, there was a slight decline in the figure of carbon
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emission
and peaked at 210
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million
tons from 270
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million
tons in 2010.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources of greenhouse gas in the UK.

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