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the chart given information about the water used in Middle east countries for three different purposes in year 2000.

the chart given information about the water used in Middle east countries for three different purposes in year 2000. mX9A1

the table shows how six different countries in the middle east used water in 2000. At first glance it is evident that while Bahrain and Kuwait made use of water predominantly for domestic purposes, the other four countries it mainly for agriculture. Turning first to Kuwait and Bahrain, Kuwait had the highest use of water, at 63%, whereas its use for agriculture was only a third of this. Accounting for a slightly lower amount of use for domestic purposes was Bahrain, but it used two times more water than Kuwait for agriculture. In contrast to this, the remaining four countries used much more for agriculture. The highest were Saudi Arabia (85%) and Oman (83%). Interestingly though, these countries had particularly low levels of domestic water use. Next, Qatar and UAE used 62% and 65% respectively for agriculture and about half this amount for domestic purposes. Finally, all six countries used very low amounts for industrial purposes, all at under 8%, the only exception being Kuwait at just under a fifth.

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