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The number of houses built per year in the cities of Derby and Nottingham

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The graph illustrated the number of houses built throughout the years(2001-2009) in the cities of Derby(Blue) and Nottingham(Yellow). In the year 2000, Derby has fewer houses built than Nottingham but, by the year 2009, Derby surpasses the number of houses built than Nottingham. The number of houses built in Derby rises stably different to Nottingham which has unstable and unpredictable numbers. The number of houses built in Derby increased exponentially from the year 2007 to 2008(an increase from 125 to 275 number of houses built). Nottingham made a decrease of number of houses built from the year 2007 to 2008(a decrease from 175 to 25 number of houses built). Overall, Derby shows an increase of number of houses built throughout the years while Nottingham shows an increase but also, major decreases in number of houses built in some of the years.
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2000, Derby has fewer
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to Nottingham which has unstable and unpredictable numbers.

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2007 to 2008(an increase from 125 to 275
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IELTS academic The number of houses built per year in the cities of Derby and Nottingham

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