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three mains export of Scouthland in 2000, *20.. , and in the future.

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The chart illustrates the three mains export of Southland in 2000, *20. . , and in the future. Overall, International tourism tend to grow in the future, while meat products likely to decrease slightly in every years. However, dairy products have the most changes out of three. International tourism can made money with around 8. 1 billion Euro in 2000. Moreover, it was the main exported in this year. According to the bar chart, the International tourism are moderately rise until 2025. In *20. . , Southland do improve it more than the past by 8. 9 billion Euro. In 2025, there will be a steady increase in the number 9. 9 billion Euro. Dairy products started with 7 billion Euro in first exported. It clearly seen that in 20. . , dairy products are significantly improve to 9. 9 billion Euro same as the tourism in 2025, on the contrary 2025, sales are drop a bit. Meat products are not quite changing a lot, merely between 5 to 6 billion Euro. In 2000, the sales were 6 billion. In 20. . , approximately 5. 5 billion Euro, and in 2025 are around 5 billion Euro.
The chart illustrates the three mains export of Southland in 2000, *20.
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and in the future.

Overall
, International
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tourism
tend to grow in the future, while meat
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products
likely to decrease
slightly
in every
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However
, dairy
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products
have the most
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changes
out of three.

International
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tourism
can made money with around 8. 1
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billion
Euro in 2000.
Moreover
, it was the main exported in this year. According to the bar chart, the International
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tourism
are
moderately
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rise
until 2025. In *20.
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Southland do
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improve
it more than

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the
past by 8. 9
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billion
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Euro
. In 2025, there will be a steady increase in the number 9. 9
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billion
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Euro
.

Dairy
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products
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started
with 7
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billion
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Euro
in
first
exported. It
clearly
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seen
that in 20.
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dairy
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significantly
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improve
to 9. 9
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billion
Euro same as the
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tourism
in 2025,
on the contrary
2025, sales are drop a bit.

Meat
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products
are not quite changing a lot,
merely
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between 5 to 6
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billion
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Euro
. In 2000, the sales were 6
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. In 20.
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approximately 5. 5
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billion
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Euro
, and in 2025 are around 5
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Euro
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IELTS academic three mains export of Scouthland in 2000, *20. . , and in the future.

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