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This task should be completed within 20 minutes. Look at the bar chart showing the biggest selling comic-book movies, their year of release and the movie studios that produced them. Describe the information in the bar chart in essay form.

This task should be completed within 20 minutes. Look at the bar chart showing the biggest selling comic-book movies, their year of release and the movie studios that produced them. Describe the information in the bar chart in essay form. YkEGN
the diagram illustrates the highest profit for comic book to movie adaptation, the diagram also tells the year of the movie released and the studio that produced the movie. The release year of the movies span from 2002 to 2015. Overall, Disney produced the most movies additionally Disney produced 3 movies with the highest profit. On the other hand. 20th century fox produced 1 movie, the least of all the movie studios. the biggest selling movie is Marvel's The Avengers released in 2012 produced by Disney, the worldwide box-office gross for this movie is 1, 519 million us dollar. the second and third movie with the highest profit is also produced by disney with profit of 1, 405 billion and 1, 215 billion. Additionally, Disney also produced four more movie which is guardian of the galaxy, captain america: the winter soldier, iron man 2 and iron man 3 that grossed 773 million, 714 million, 624 million and 585 million respectively. Warner bros produced 3 movies with the dark night rises and the dark knight as the fourth and fifth biggest selling movie with a box office gross of 1, 084 million for the dark knight rises and 1, 003 million for the dark knight, the third movie is man of steel that grossed 668 million. Colombia pictures produced 4 movie, the movie are spiderman 1, 2, 3 and the amazing spider-man. Spider man 3 has the highest gross at 891 million followed by spider man, spiderman 2, and the amazing spiderman at 882 million, 784 millon, and 758 million. 20th century fox produced X-Men: Days of future past with 748 million worldwide box office gross.
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diagram illustrates the highest
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for comic book to
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adaptation, the diagram
also
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the year of the
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released and the studio that
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produced
the
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movie
. The release year of the
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movies
span from 2002 to 2015.
Overall
, Disney
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produced
the most
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movies
additionally
Disney
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produced
3
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movies
with the highest
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.
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. 20th century fox
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produced
1
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movie
, the least of all the
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studios.

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the
biggest selling
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movie
is Marvel's The Avengers released in 2012
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produced
by Disney, the worldwide box-office gross for this
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movie
is 1, 519
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million
us dollar.
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second and third
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with the highest
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by
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disney
with
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of 1, 405 billion and 1, 215 billion.
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also
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four more
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which is guardian of the galaxy, captain
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america
: the winter soldier, iron
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2 and iron
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3 that grossed 773
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, 714
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, 624
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and 585
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respectively
. Warner bros
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3
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movies
with the
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night rises and the
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knight as the fourth and fifth biggest selling
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with a box office gross of 1, 084
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for the
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knight rises and 1, 003
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for the
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knight, the third
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is
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of steel that grossed 668 million.

Colombia pictures
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4
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, the
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are
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1, 2, 3 and the amazing spider-
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. Spider
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3 has the highest gross at 891
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followed by spider
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,
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spiderman
2, and the amazing
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at 882
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, 784
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, and 758
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. 20th century fox
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X-
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: Days of future past with 748
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worldwide box office gross.

IELTS academic This task should be completed within 20 minutes. Look at the bar chart showing the biggest selling comic-book movies, their year of release and the movie studios that produced them. Describe the information in the bar chart in essay form.

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