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This table shows employees number from 1851 to 1901.

This table shows employees number from 1851 to 1901. MomVe
This table shows employees number from 1851 to 1901. It is clear from the graph that men employees were always more than women employees, also the number of the factories was increasing until 1891. According to what is shown, in 1851 the number of total employees was 477, 100 and there were 225 factories, then in 1861 the number reduced to 291, 780 of total employees and there were two new factories. While from 1871 to 1891 the employees number dramatically decreased to 105, 000 in 1891, there were 625 factories, finally in 1901 the total number of employees sharply declined to 61, 000, the number of factories gradually falled to 600. To sum up, we could say that the number of employees was decreasing every year, the male workers were more than femal workers, number of factories was soaring until 1881, in 1891 the factories started to decrease.
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was 477, 100 and there were 225
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