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firstly, this is a line graph, this has a vast variety of things in it. ok this can be extended by writing few lines in it, which I think will be very simple because of the amount of information provided in the graph. To start with this is a trivial bar graph depicting the variation of writing over a period of time. time will tell what kind of passage I may get because there is a lot of variety in the type of questions asked in the exam. so the only way to score a good score is to prepare for all kinds of passage and more importantly not leaving any

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirstly
firstly
, this is a line graph, this has a vast variety of things in it. ok this can be extended
 by writing few lines in it, which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 simple This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the amount of information provided in the graph. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with this is a trivial bar graph depicting the variation of writing over a period of time. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTime
time
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 what kind of passage I may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 variety in the type of questions asked in the exam. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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good
 score is to prepare for all kinds of passage and more importantly
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