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birth and death rates in new zeland

birth and death rates in new zeland Ep5P3

The rendered line graph depicts alternation of death and birth rates ranging from 1921 and 2101. Overall, the death rate is represented by a steady rise however, the birth rates on the other side are fluctuating, ultimately causing a decline at the start of the new century. In the year 1921, the birth and death rates were 20 and 30 respectively however, both of these experienced a sudden change in which the numbers of the birth rate increased by 5%, on the contrary, the death rate decreased by nearly 7%. The birth rate kept fluctuating till 2001, after that, a gradual increase is observed for next sixty years, ultimately reaching to its maximum value in 2061 so resulting in mountain curve, eventually reached to 55 at the end of a given period. On the other hand, the graph of deaths rates showed variability all the time. From 1941 the values increased till 70 but showed down curves in between that period. In the next twenty years, the values experienced a drop of nearly 20%. Ultimately the values reached to value of 55 at the start of the next decade.

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 reached to 55 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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On the other hand
, the graph of deaths You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
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 down curves in between that period. In the next
 twenty years, the values experienced a drop of nearly
 20%. Ultimately
 the values reached to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
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start
 of the next
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