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The pie chart gives information about of the average household expenditure in Japan and Malaysia in the of 2010.

The pie chart gives information about of the average household expenditure in Japan and Malaysia in the of 2010. bQJV3

The given pie chart illustrated data about the average family expenses in both nations Japan and Malaysia in 2010. To begin with, most of the expenditure in japan was made on good and other services, it comprised to 29% of the total expensive as compared to Malaysia, which only spent 26%, correspondingly. While, food come as a second choice for Japanese, with 24 %. In contrast, approx, 27% Malaysian people wanted to buy a food items. Next, the expenditure of medical was 6% in Japan, which ratio was twice than Malaysia. Moving towards, in Japan, the rate of expenditure for house accommodation had only 21%. However, Malaysia had the numerous of expenditure for house was 34%, respectively. In terms of transport, Japan spent 20% money on it, whereas, Malaysia spent just 10% money on transportation. Overall, it is vividly seen that, they share similar expenditure in 2010 Where most of the money was spend at household, food, housing, and other good and services.

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Japan
 and Malaysia in 2010.

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expenditure
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japan
was made
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good
 and other services, it comprised to 29% of the total expensive as compared to Malaysia, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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. While, food This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 as a second choice for Japanese, with 24 %. In contrast
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people
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buy
 a food items. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 of medical was 6% in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
, which ratio was Use "(twice)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(twice)
twice
 than Malaysia.

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Japan
, the rate of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
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house
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only
 21%. However
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the numerous of
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expenditure
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 was 34%, respectively
. In terms of transport, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withglazevarnishlacquerstaincoating
Japan
 spent 20% money on it, whereas, Malaysia spent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 10% money on transportation.

Overall
, it is vividly
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seen
 that, they share similar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 in 2010 Where most of the money was Consider using a past participle here: "spent".spent
spend
 at household, food, housing, and other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and services. 