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chart of bread in a european country

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The given chart illustrates how much Euros 800 grams of four kinds of bread cost in a European nation between 2001 and 2006. Overall, the price of Brown, White and Rye witnessed an upward trend, whereas Wholegrain’s price experienced some fluctuations and stabilized at the end of the period shown. In addition, the price of 800 grams of Brown was the highest among that of 3 types. In 2001, it cost 0. 8 euros to buy 800 grams of Wholegrain, then its value reached to a peak of 1. 8 euros in the following year. Similarly, at first, the price of 800 grams of Brown stood at around 0. 5 euros before it grew rapidly to about 1. 5 euros in 2002. While the price of 800 grams of Wholegrain experienced a dramatic decline and went back to its initial value of 0. 8 euros, that figure of Brown saw a fluctuation and rose to 1. 6 euros in 2005. Moving on, the price of 800 grams of Rye mostly remained unchanged and increased slightly to around 0. 7 euros at the end of the period. The only figure saw a steady rise was that of White, which grew to 1. 3 euros per 800 grams in 2005.

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