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This pie chart represents the average amount of sodium, added sugar and saturated fats in a typical meal in the United States of America.

This pie chart represents the average amount of sodium, added sugar and saturated fats in a typical meal in the United States of America. aljWG
This pie chart represents the average amount of sodium, added sugar and saturated fats in a typical meal in the United States of America. The viewers can understand what they really consume from a glance at this information. From this we can observe that levels of sodium and saturated fats are the highest in breakfast and are only overtaken by snacks when it comes to added sugar. Snacks contain the least amount of sodium tied with dinner and moderate saturated fats. Lunch follows the similar pattern to that of breakfast as its at its peak in sodium and saturated fats and only lowers down in added sugar. Dinner shows us the least amount of the three nutrients when compares to others. Breakfast massively overshadowing dinner is not uncommon as eating more in the morning is more beneficial for a person to have the energy needed to live out the day. The abnormally high levels of sugar in snacks is a problem as their main consumer are children. 42% sugar compared to the breakfast which has 23% is concerning as snacks are usually consumed after lunch and at occasions after breakfast. Due to this sudden intake of high amount of sugars when its not needed its no surprise that U. S. A. leads when it comes to obesity rates.
This pie chart represents the average
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amount
of sodium,
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added
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sugar
and
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saturated
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fats
in a typical meal in the United States of America. The viewers can understand what they
really
consume from a glance at this information. From this we can observe that levels of sodium and
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saturated
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fats
are the highest in
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breakfast
and are
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only
overtaken by snacks when it
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comes
to
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added
sugar.

Snacks contain the least
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amount
of sodium tied with dinner and moderate
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saturated
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fats
. Lunch follows the similar pattern to that of
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breakfast
as its at its peak in sodium and
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saturated
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fats
and
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only
lowers down in
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added
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sugar
. Dinner
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shows
us the least
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amount
of the three nutrients when compares to others.

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massively
overshadowing dinner is not uncommon as eating more in the morning is more beneficial for a person to have the energy needed to
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live
out the day. The
abnormally
high levels of
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sugar
in snacks is a problem as their main consumer are children. 42%
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sugar
compared to the
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breakfast
which has 23%
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is concerning
as snacks are
usually
consumed after lunch and at occasions after
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breakfast
. Due to this sudden intake of high
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amount
of
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sugars
when its not needed
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no surprise that U. S. A. leads when it
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comes
to obesity rates.
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