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The table below shows the number of cars and bikes per 1000 people in different cities in 2007

The table below shows the number of cars and bikes per 1000 people in different cities in 2007 Bwbj6
The tabular chart illustrates the data in the terms of per thousand people regarding the number of cars and motorcycles in 6 distinguished cities during the year 2007. It is clear that Sydney had the highest number of cars, which accounted for 506 per thousand people (ptp), whereas Jakarta displayed the lowest number, which constituted merely 88 ptp. The second highest number was witnessed in Cairo, accounting for 205 ptp. cairo was followed by Paris and London (189 and 179 ptp, respectively). A significantly less quantity of kaula lumper owned cars, and the figure was recorded 112 ptp. Analysing further, the maximum figure of bikes was observed in kaula lumper (509 ptp); by contrast, the minimum number in Jakarta (a mere 112 ptp). Sydney ranked the. Second with the figure being 485 ptp. More bikes were owned by London (410 ptp)than Paris and Cairo ( 320 and 310 ptp, correspondingly). Overall, it can be seen that Sydney and kaula lumper notched the top slot in cars and bikes, while Jakarta was in the bottom slot. Also, in all the countries except Sydney, bikes outnumbered the cars
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and motorcycles in 6 distinguished cities during the year 2007. It is
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that Sydney had the highest
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, which accounted for 506 per thousand
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), whereas Jakarta displayed the lowest
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, which constituted
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. The second highest
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in Jakarta (a mere 112
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). Sydney ranked
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by London (410
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, while Jakarta was in the bottom slot.
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