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This image shows five people at the front most of the image there is a old man with the white moustache beard and grey hair wearing a white and blue square pattern apron with a yellow shirt underneath there is a barbeque oven in front of him holding a steak with a pincer grilling in the barbecue oven. In the background there is a group of four people made up of seemingly two male and two female surrounding on the white table are plastic container food and tall glass of beer. The location seem to be in the park or near a forest. They seem to be the group of family activity may be family having a picnic or having barbecue party.

This image shows five people at the front most of the image there is a old man with the white moustache beard and grey hair wearing a white and blue square pattern apron with a yellow shirt underneath there is a barbeque oven in front of him holding a steak with a pincer grilling in the barbecue oven. In the background there is a group of four people made up of seemingly two male and two female surrounding on the white table are plastic container food and tall glass of beer. The location seem to be in the park or near a forest. They seem to be the group of family activity may be family having a picnic or having barbecue party. MrbQe
This image shows five people at the front most of the image there is a old man with the white moustache beard and grey hair wearing a white and blue square pattern apron with a yellow shirt underneath there is a barbeque oven in front of him holding a steak with a pincer grilling in the barbecue oven. In the background there is a group of four people made up of seemingly two male and two female surrounding on the white table are plastic container food and tall glass of beer. The location seem to be in the park or near a forest. They seem to be the group of family activity may be family having a picnic or having barbecue party.
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at the front most of the image there is
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with the white
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beard and
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hair wearing a white and blue square pattern apron with a yellow shirt underneath there is a
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barbeque
oven in front of him holding a steak with a pincer grilling in the
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barbecue
oven. In the background there is a group of four
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people
made up of
seemingly
two male and two female surrounding on the white table are plastic container food and tall glass of beer. The location seem to be in the park or near a forest. They seem to be the group of family activity may be family having a picnic or having
Do not mix variants of the same word ('barbecue' and 'barbeque') within a single text.
barbecue
party.

IELTS academic This image shows five people at the front most of the image there is a old man with the white moustache beard and grey hair wearing a white and blue square pattern apron with a yellow shirt underneath there is a barbeque oven in front of him holding a steak with a pincer grilling in the barbecue oven. In the background there is a group of four people made up of seemingly two male and two female surrounding on the white table are plastic container food and tall glass of beer. The location seem to be in the park or near a forest. They seem to be the group of family activity may be family having a picnic or having barbecue party.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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