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The given bar chart illusrates  the usage rates of seven causes for adults studying, while pie chart provides information about how course should be funded amount of participents. Overall, it is obvius that interest in subject and improve parctice the most common reasons why a lot of adults choose study and the most mentioned group from pie chart is individual group. As is presented in the bar chart  the largest percentages of people as 40 % and 38 % make decision for two primary reasons such as interest in subject and they want to take more practices from study.   Only 20% grown-ups continue their education due to enjoy learning and improve prospects of promotion.   Adults who want to switch their job display smaller figures than other lines. It is 12%. According to the pie chart, 40 % of the survey takers prefer that adult study should be pay by individuals. 35% of people state that the employers and the remaining 25% taxpayers think that they should pay the cost of adult study.
The
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given
bar
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chart
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illusrates
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the usage rates of seven causes for
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adults
studying, while pie
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chart
provides information about how course should
be funded
amount of
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participents
.

Overall
, it is
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obvius
that interest in subject and
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improve
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parctice
the most common reasons why
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a lot of
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adults
choose
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study
and the most mentioned group from pie
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chart
is individual group.

As
is presented
in the bar chart
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the largest percentages of
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people
as 40 % and 38 %
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make
decision for two primary reasons such as interest in
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subject and
they want to take more practices from
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study
.
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Only
20% grown-ups continue their education due to enjoy learning and
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improve
prospects of promotion.
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Adults
who want to switch their job display smaller figures than other lines. It is 12%.

According to the pie
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chart
, 40 % of the survey takers prefer that adult
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study
should be pay by individuals. 35% of
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people
state that the employers and the remaining 25% taxpayers
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think
that they should pay the cost of adult
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study
.
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  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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